STORY - Hobbies


Your class has been discussing the topic of leisure activities. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a school magazine. Write a story about how you spent your leisure time doing something enjoyable.

Theme  Hobbies
DSKP Theme  People and Culture
Format   Story
Main Points
  • Exposition: I decided to spend a Saturday afternoon baking cookies.
  • Rising Action: Enjoy the baking process, and everything is going smoothly and happily.
  • Climax: I accidentally knock over a flour container, creating a huge mess in the kitchen.
  • Falling Action: The cookies turn out great.
  • Resolution: Reflect on the unexpected experience.


 

A Sweet Escape

"Happiness is homemade." That’s what the little wooden sign above my kitchen stove says, and I couldn’t agree more. While others may kick a ball or scroll endlessly on social media, I turn to baking to unwind. One sunny Saturday, I decided to spend my leisure time baking a batch of my favourite treat, double chocolate chip cookies. It had been a tiring week at school, and the thought of warm cookies and the smell of vanilla was just what I needed.

I headed to the kitchen and laid out all the ingredients. The soft whiff of cocoa powder filled the air, and the moment I cracked the first egg, I felt like I was in my own little baking show. I mixed, stirred, and folded the dough with great care, adding a handful of chocolate chips for extra joy. My playlist played cheerfully in the background, and everything seemed perfect, until disaster struck.

As I reached for the tray, my elbow knocked over the flour container. Poof! A snowy cloud filled the room. I stood there, completely covered in white, looking like a baking ghost. I couldn’t help but burst into laughter. It was a mess, but it was hilarious and strangely, it made the day even better.

Thankfully, the cookies came out just right, crispy on the outside, gooey in the middle, and still warm. I shared them with my younger brother, who gave me two thumbs up. His smile was the cherry on top, and I felt a wave of satisfaction wash over me.

That simple afternoon became one of my most enjoyable moments. Baking never fails to lift my spirits, and I highly recommend it to anyone who needs a break from their routine. After all, a little sweetness goes a long way!


 

(297 Words)

 

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                                        General Statement            
                                      Background Statement            
                                      Thesis Statement            
                                      Supporting Detail            
             Example
Concluding Sentence
  Feelings
  Rewrite Thesis
  Summarization
  Recommendation
  Idiom / Simile / Hyperbole
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Bolded Orange Cohesive Device
Italicized Word Bombastic Word / Narrative Hook / Dialogue / Monologue / Quote

STORY - Hobbies


Your class has been discussing the topic of leisure activities. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a school magazine. Write a story about how you spent your leisure time doing something enjoyable.

Theme  Hobbies
DSKP Theme  People and Culture
Format   Story
Main Points
  • Exposition: I decided to spend a Saturday afternoon baking cookies.
  • Rising Action: Enjoy the baking process, and everything is going smoothly and happily.
  • Climax: I accidentally knock over a flour container, creating a huge mess in the kitchen.
  • Falling Action: The cookies turn out great.
  • Resolution: Reflect on the unexpected experience.


 

A Sweet Escape

"Happiness is homemade." That’s what the little wooden sign above my kitchen stove says, and I couldn’t agree more. While others may kick a ball or scroll endlessly on social media, I turn to baking to unwind. One sunny Saturday, I decided to spend my leisure time baking a batch of my favourite treat, double chocolate chip cookies. It had been a tiring week at school, and the thought of warm cookies and the smell of vanilla was just what I needed.

I headed to the kitchen and laid out all the ingredients. The soft whiff of cocoa powder filled the air, and the moment I cracked the first egg, I felt like I was in my own little baking show. I mixed, stirred, and folded the dough with great care, adding a handful of chocolate chips for extra joy. My playlist played cheerfully in the background, and everything seemed perfect, until disaster struck.

As I reached for the tray, my elbow knocked over the flour container. Poof! A snowy cloud filled the room. I stood there, completely covered in white, looking like a baking ghost. I couldn’t help but burst into laughter. It was a mess, but it was hilarious and strangely, it made the day even better.

Thankfully, the cookies came out just right, crispy on the outside, gooey in the middle, and still warm. I shared them with my younger brother, who gave me two thumbs up. His smile was the cherry on top, and I felt a wave of satisfaction wash over me.

That simple afternoon became one of my most enjoyable moments. Baking never fails to lift my spirits, and I highly recommend it to anyone who needs a break from their routine. After all, a little sweetness goes a long way!


 

(297 Words)

 

            Region            
                                        General Statement            
                                      Background Statement            
                                      Thesis Statement            
                                      Supporting Detail            
             Example
Concluding Sentence
  Feelings
  Rewrite Thesis
  Summarization
  Recommendation
  Idiom / Simile / Hyperbole
Bolded Black Main Point
Bolded Orange Cohesive Device
Italicized Word Bombastic Word / Narrative Hook / Dialogue / Monologue / Quote