REVIEW - A Place You've Always Wanted to Visit


You recently went on a holiday to a place you've always wanted to visit.Your teacher has asked you to write a review of your experience for the school magazine.

Theme  Travel and Exploration
DSKP Theme  People and Culture
Format   Review
Main Points
  • I would love to visit New Zealand because of its breathtaking natural beauty
  • Because of the friendly culture and outdoor lifestyle in New Zealand

 

Review on Why New Zealand is My Dream Destination

If I were given a chance to travel anywhere in the world, I would choose New Zealand without hesitation. I’ve never been there before, but I’ve always been curious about its natural landscapes and calm lifestyle. What is it like to walk among sheep-filled hills? How does the air feel in a country known for its greenery? These are just some of the questions that excite me. 

One reason I would love to visit New Zealand is because of its breathtaking natural beauty. The country is famous for its rolling hills, majestic mountains, and crystal-clear lakes. Whenever I see photos or videos of these places, I am filled with awe and wonder. I can't help but imagine myself hiking through these landscapes, feeling at peace in nature. All in all, New Zealand’s natural beauty is one of the most compelling reasons why I dream of visiting.

In addition, I would love to visit New Zealand because of the friendly culture and outdoor lifestyle in New Zealand. New Zealanders, or “Kiwis,” are known to be welcoming and laid-back. The country also offers numerous outdoor activities, such as hiking, kayaking, and even bungee jumping. The thought of immersing myself in a warm and hospitable environment while exploring new adventures excites me. I’m sure it would feel like being welcomed into a second home. In short, the welcoming nature of the people and the adventurous lifestyle make New Zealand an ideal destination for me.

In summary, New Zealand is my dream travel destination because of its stunning natural beauty, vibrant culture, and unique attractions. If given the chance, I would definitely recommend this amazing country to my friends and family. It would be the cherry on top of any adventure.
 

 

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REVIEW - A Place You've Always Wanted to Visit


You recently went on a holiday to a place you've always wanted to visit.Your teacher has asked you to write a review of your experience for the school magazine.

Theme  Travel and Exploration
DSKP Theme  People and Culture
Format   Review
Main Points
  • I would love to visit New Zealand because of its breathtaking natural beauty
  • Because of the friendly culture and outdoor lifestyle in New Zealand

 

Review on Why New Zealand is My Dream Destination

If I were given a chance to travel anywhere in the world, I would choose New Zealand without hesitation. I’ve never been there before, but I’ve always been curious about its natural landscapes and calm lifestyle. What is it like to walk among sheep-filled hills? How does the air feel in a country known for its greenery? These are just some of the questions that excite me. 

One reason I would love to visit New Zealand is because of its breathtaking natural beauty. The country is famous for its rolling hills, majestic mountains, and crystal-clear lakes. Whenever I see photos or videos of these places, I am filled with awe and wonder. I can't help but imagine myself hiking through these landscapes, feeling at peace in nature. All in all, New Zealand’s natural beauty is one of the most compelling reasons why I dream of visiting.

In addition, I would love to visit New Zealand because of the friendly culture and outdoor lifestyle in New Zealand. New Zealanders, or “Kiwis,” are known to be welcoming and laid-back. The country also offers numerous outdoor activities, such as hiking, kayaking, and even bungee jumping. The thought of immersing myself in a warm and hospitable environment while exploring new adventures excites me. I’m sure it would feel like being welcomed into a second home. In short, the welcoming nature of the people and the adventurous lifestyle make New Zealand an ideal destination for me.

In summary, New Zealand is my dream travel destination because of its stunning natural beauty, vibrant culture, and unique attractions. If given the chance, I would definitely recommend this amazing country to my friends and family. It would be the cherry on top of any adventure.
 

 

(287 Words)

 

            Region            
                                        General Statement            
                                      Background Statement            
                                      Thesis Statement            
                                      Supporting Detail            
             Example
Concluding Sentence
  Feelings
  Rewrite Thesis
  Summarization
  Recommendation
  Idiom / Simile / Hyperbole
Bolded Black Main Point
Bolded Orange Cohesive Device
Italicized Word Bombastic Word / Narrative Hook / Dialogue / Monologue / Quote