Write a story about a person who turned to crime.
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- Exposition - Aiman grows up in a poor household, raised by his sick mother while his father is absent.
- Rising Action - Struggling with poverty, Aiman is introduced to crime by a friend
- Climax - After a robbery goes wrong and someone gets hurt, Aiman is overwhelmed with guilt.
- Falling Action - Aiman is sent to juvenile detention.
- Resolution - After being released, Aiman starts volunteering at a youth center.
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The Shadow Behind his Smile
Aiman had always worn a smile that concealed the weight of his struggles. Growing up in poverty with an absentee father and a sick mother, he faced challenges that seemed impossible to overcome. No matter how hard he worked, his life felt like a never-ending uphill battle.
One fateful day, a friend introduced him to the world of crime. Like a moth to a flame, Aiman was drawn to the quick money and the illusion of an easier life. His first robbery was small, seemingly harmless, but it snowballed quickly. Each successful theft made him feel invincible, like a lion on the hunt. He told himself it was only temporary, just a way to support his family. But soon, it became his new reality, and the lines between right and wrong blurred beyond recognition.
The day everything changed came unexpectedly. A robbery went terribly wrong, and someone was hurt. The guilt hit him like a ton of bricks, and Aiman found himself spiraling. The shame was unbearable, and the realization of what he had become was like a punch to the gut. The hardest blow came when he saw the disappointment in his mother’s eyes.
In juvenile detention, Aiman finally faced the consequences of his actions. The time in isolation felt like a prison within a prison, but it gave him the chance to reflect. He decided that he could change, no matter how much his past haunted him.
Upon release, Aiman began volunteering at a youth center, determined to help others avoid the mistakes he had made. His past was a shadow he could never escape, but he vowed to turn it into a lesson for others, proving that redemption was possible for anyone willing to change.
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