STORY - My First Part-Time Job


You never expected your first part-time job to teach you so much.

Write a story titled: "My First Part-Time Job."

Theme  Work Experience
DSKP Theme  People and Culture
Format   Story
Main Points
  • Exposition: The narrator starts her first part-time job at a bakery during the school holidays to gain experience and earn pocket money.
  • Rising Action: She struggles with the cash register, faces a strict manager, and makes mistakes that shake her confidence.
  • Climax: During a hectic day, the system craches.
  • Falling action: She manages to stay calm.
  • Resolution: She becomes more confident and realises that the job taught her maturity, patience, and responsibility.


 

My First Part-Time Job

Experience is the best teacher and my first part-time job proved that saying true in every sense. During my school holidays, I decided to earn some extra money by working at a small bakery near my house. I imagined it would be simple, just smile, punch in a few numbers, and hand over change. Oh, how wrong I was.

From the very beginning, the bakery buzzed like a beehive. The smell of freshly baked bread filled the air, making my stomach grumble even before lunch. The cash register was a monster of buttons and beeps, and my nervous fingers trembled like leaves in the wind. Customers came in non-stop, each more impatient than the last. To make matters worse, I accidentally gave the wrong change to a fussy aunty who scolded me loudly.

But then, came the real test. One hectic Saturday, the system crashed, and I had to do everything manually. My hands were shaking, but I remembered what the manager said: "Stay calm, or you’ll sink like a stone." I scribbled orders, used my phone calculator, and tried my best to keep smiling. Somehow, I survived the chaos.

After that, my manager clapped me on the back and said I had fire in my belly. I began to feel more capable, more confident. The job became less scary, and more satisfying.

All in all, that job taught me more than school ever could. It wasn't just work, it was a baptism of fire that helped me grow up a little faster.


 

(253 Words)

 

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                                        General Statement            
                                      Background Statement            
                                      Thesis Statement            
                                      Supporting Detail            
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Concluding Sentence
  Feelings
  Rewrite Thesis
  Summarization
  Recommendation
  Idiom / Simile / Hyperbole
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STORY - My First Part-Time Job


You never expected your first part-time job to teach you so much.

Write a story titled: "My First Part-Time Job."

Theme  Work Experience
DSKP Theme  People and Culture
Format   Story
Main Points
  • Exposition: The narrator starts her first part-time job at a bakery during the school holidays to gain experience and earn pocket money.
  • Rising Action: She struggles with the cash register, faces a strict manager, and makes mistakes that shake her confidence.
  • Climax: During a hectic day, the system craches.
  • Falling action: She manages to stay calm.
  • Resolution: She becomes more confident and realises that the job taught her maturity, patience, and responsibility.


 

My First Part-Time Job

Experience is the best teacher and my first part-time job proved that saying true in every sense. During my school holidays, I decided to earn some extra money by working at a small bakery near my house. I imagined it would be simple, just smile, punch in a few numbers, and hand over change. Oh, how wrong I was.

From the very beginning, the bakery buzzed like a beehive. The smell of freshly baked bread filled the air, making my stomach grumble even before lunch. The cash register was a monster of buttons and beeps, and my nervous fingers trembled like leaves in the wind. Customers came in non-stop, each more impatient than the last. To make matters worse, I accidentally gave the wrong change to a fussy aunty who scolded me loudly.

But then, came the real test. One hectic Saturday, the system crashed, and I had to do everything manually. My hands were shaking, but I remembered what the manager said: "Stay calm, or you’ll sink like a stone." I scribbled orders, used my phone calculator, and tried my best to keep smiling. Somehow, I survived the chaos.

After that, my manager clapped me on the back and said I had fire in my belly. I began to feel more capable, more confident. The job became less scary, and more satisfying.

All in all, that job taught me more than school ever could. It wasn't just work, it was a baptism of fire that helped me grow up a little faster.


 

(253 Words)

 

            Region            
                                        General Statement            
                                      Background Statement            
                                      Thesis Statement            
                                      Supporting Detail            
             Example
Concluding Sentence
  Feelings
  Rewrite Thesis
  Summarization
  Recommendation
  Idiom / Simile / Hyperbole
Bolded Black Main Point
Bolded Orange Cohesive Device
Italicized Word Bombastic Word / Narrative Hook / Dialogue / Monologue / Quote